Devils Highway
This project was started in 2004. I was fascinated by the prospects of aliens infiltrating a rural Rocky Mountain town, and through the generations moulding the traditions and community mind of the entire populace. It is only after a stranger shows up in town that the strangeness becomes apparent to the townspeople.
It was an interesting story, but I fell away from it. Doubtless the story will be implemented in some way in the Angels and Dreamers storyline.
FADE IN:
INT APARTMENT - ESTABLISHING
Newsprint and articles hang on every available square inch of wall. An open NOTEBOOK sits open on the coffee table.
GRETCHEN HOLDIR (26) lies asleep on the worn couch. Her dark hair covers her face.
MATTHIAS UNDERWOOD (30) opens one eye to see if Gretchen is asleep. He silently writes a short message in the open notebook.
He slips the RING off his little finger and sets it on the notebook.
At the door, Matthias stops. He pulls a TURQUIOSE NECKLACE from his pocket. As he studies it, his eyes cloud over.
MATTHIAS
I'm sorry, Gretchen. I made a promise to someone else. Goodbye.
Then he turns and leaves.
EXT US HWY 666 - DAY
One year later.
Gretchen drives down the road in her old sedan. The RING rests prominently on her middle finger.
Music blasts on the radio. Gretchen's cell phone rings.
GRETCHEN
Yeah, Gretchen Holdir.
On the other end, her boss, NATHANIEL "NATTIE" HAWKINS (50's), grumps at her.
NATTIE HAWKINS
Where are you?
Gretchen pulls the map onto her lap and glances down at it.
GRETCHEN
About an hour past Shiprock, New Mexico.
NATTIE HAWKINS
Got anything yet?
GRETCHEN
I'm working on it. I haven't seen anything but sheep and sagebrush for the last twenty minutes.
Up ahead, a hitchiker, NEIRA HEXEN (25), waves Gretchen to a halt.
GRETCHEN
Hold on, Nattie, I'm picking up a hitchiker.
NATTIE HAWKINS
I don't need another reporter disappearing, Gretchen. You and Matthias were the best team we had.
Gretchen unlocks the door for Neira. She climbs in and smiles.
NEIRA
Thanks. I've been walking all day.
GRETCHEN
Look, Nattie, I just picked up a cute girl. I gotta go.
NATTIE HAWKINS
What? What does she look like? Get some pictures. I want -
Gretchen hangs up.
GRETCHEN
Sorry. My boss.
Neira looks in the mirror and straightens her blond hair.
NEIRA
It's like an oven out there.
GRETCHEN
In here's not much better. Air went out six hours ago.
NEIRA
That's okay. I'm Neira Hexen.
Gretchen pulls back onto the road.
GRETCHEN
Gretchen Holdir. What are you doing out here by yourself? I didn't see any cars back there.
NEIRA
I'm going home. Been gone a while.
GRETCHEN
Oh yeah? Where's home?
Gretchen hands the map to Neira.
NEIRA
It's not on the map. Just a small mining town a few miles from here.
GRETCHEN
Oh yeah? Seen any strange things around here? Unexplained phenomena? Cattle mutilations? That sort of thing.
Neira rolls her eyes.
NEIRA
Great. You're not one of those UFO nuts, are you? Please say no.
Gretchen smiles.
GRETCHEN
I'm a reporter. For The Gray Matter.
NEIRA
Hmm. Haven't heard of that one.
GRETCHEN
It's an online newspaper. Nattie, my boss, says if I can get this story, he'll get me an interview with the Weekly World News.
Neira laughs.
NEIRA
That's a supermarket tabloid.
GRETCHEN
With an incredibly large circulation.
NEIRA
You can do better than that.
GRETCHEN
Do you know how hard it is to find a paying job investigating weird stuff? Ghosts, UFO's, and freaks are not exactly Pulitzer material.
Neira opens up her bag and pulls out an apple. She offers a bite to Gretchen.
GRETCHEN
No thanks.
NEIRA
If it doesn't pay, why do it?
GRETCHEN
I don't know. I just love it. Always have. Probably always will.
Neira points to a dirt road off to the right.
NEIRA
Turn here.
GRETCHEN
What's down there?
NEIRA
Home.
Gretchen slows and turns down the faint dirt road.
NEIRA
It's not real big, but it's got an old motel. There's always an open room.
GRETCHEN
Anything weird ever happen there?
NEIRA
Why?
GRETCHEN
This area is supposed to be a hotspot for paranormal activity. You know, Highway six-six-six. The Devil's Highway.
Neira shrugs.
NEIRA
It's just home to me.
(smiles)
But you're welcome to talk to anyone you want.
EXT VALHALLA SPRINGS - AFTERNOON
The small town of Valhalla Springs consists of a few buildings, some outlying houses, and a small general store.
Gretchen follows the dirt road between two hills and stops when she sees the town.
GRETCHEN
This is home?
NEIRA
Welcome to Valhalla Springs.
Gretchen drives down and stops in front of the General Store.
NEIRA
I'll introduce you.
INT GENERAL STORE - CONTINUING
The store owner, AGNES BARTOLOME (63), peers out over her spectacles at the two girls entering. Her face brightens when she recognizes Neira.
AGNES BARTOLOME
Neira, honeycakes, you came back. Did you find what you were looking for?
Neira glances quickly at Gretchen, and then pulls a worn pair of shoes out of her bag.
NEIRA
I did. Got a couple of new souls.
Gretchen looks up at her, startled.
NEIRA
For my shoes. Soles for my shoes.
GRETCHEN
Oh. Of course. I thought you meant -
AGNES BARTOLOME
Who's your friend?
NEIRA
Agnes, this is Gretchen Holdir. She's a reporter. Gretchen, this is Agnes Bartolome, the second oldest person in Valhalla Springs.
The door flies open. The local law enforcement, DEPUTY RUFFIN COOMBS (32), swaggers in and cocks his hat at a rakish angle.
RUFFIN COOMBS
I see a car parked in a no parking zone out front. Who's the perpetrator?
GRETCHEN
That would be me. Is there a problem?
Ruffin sweeps his hat off his head and hooks his thumbs in his belt loops.
RUFFIN COOMBS
You bet your rosy round bottom there is. We're expecting a supply truck any day now. Right there.
NEIRA
Ruffin, leave her alone.
RUFFIN COOMBS
I'll go easy on you this time, but it'll cost you. One dinner. With me. Tonight.
AGNES BARTOLOME
And he'll make you cook.
Neira takes Gretchen's elbow and tries to pull her away from Ruffin.
NEIRA
Come on, Gretchen.
GRETCHEN
Ruffin, is it? You've lived here your whole life?
Ruffin smiles proudly.
GRETCHEN
I'll bet you know everything that goes on around here.
Agnes and Neira exchange a confused look.
GRETCHEN
I'd love to hear what you know about this area. Dinner would be wonderful.
Ruffin's smile nearly splits his face in two.
GRETCHEN
But ... I've had such a long day driving. And I'm so tired. Would you be a love and whip up something for us to eat?
Ruffin's smile drops.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Well, I s'pose I could -
GRETCHEN
Wonderful. We'll get along great. Oh, and don't make anything greasy. Gives me gas. Some poached chicken would be great.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Um.
GRETCHEN
I'll see you in an hour.
Gretchen squeezes his hand as she exits.
RUFFIN COOMBS
What just happened?
AGNES BARTOLOME
Little girl's got teeth.
NEIRA
C'mon, Ruff. I'll give you a hand in the kitchen.
INT MOTEL ROOM - EVENING
Gretchen's clothing lays out on the bed. She splashes water on her face in the bathroom.
A KNOCK at her door.
GRETCHEN
Just a minute.
Drying her face, she opens the door. No one.
GRETCHEN
Hello?
Across the street, a shadowed face peeks around a building. As Gretchen closes the door, Matthias steps out of the shadow.
MATTHIAS
You stupid, stupid girl.
EXT MOTEL - ROOF - EVENING
Gretchen overlooks the town. A cool breeze ruffles through her hair. Her shirt is unbuttoned over a tank top.
She snaps a few photos of the town and the sunset.
Behind her, Ruffin sets the food out on a card table. He unfolds two chairs for them to sit.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Food's gonna get cold.
GRETCHEN
I'm here for the conversation.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Well, the food's still gonna get cold.
The sun sinks below the distant hills.
GRETCHEN
Ever wonder if there's really life out there?
RUFFIN COOMBS
Not no more.
Without turning around, Gretchen smiles.
GRETCHEN
So you've found the truth?
Ruffin's eyes glaze over black for a moment.
RUFFIN COOMBS
I found the truth.
Gretchen turns around and leans back on the railing.
GRETCHEN
And what is your version of the truth?
RUFFIN COOMBS
Home's where you hang your heart.
GRETCHEN
Don't you mean, "Home is where the heart is"?
Ruffin shrugs. He points to the food.
RUFFIN COOMBS
I made this for you. Y'gonna eat, or what?
Gretchen sits down. She accidentally knocks her fork off the table.
GRETCHEN
Oops. I've got it.
As she bends down to grab her fork, she sees Ruffin's GUN loose in its holster.
GRETCHEN
Got it.
(blows it off)
Good as new.
(smiles)
So, Ruffin, tell me about yourself. Have you always lived in Valhalla Springs?
Through a monstrous mouthful of food, Ruffin tries to talk. Bits of food fall from his mouth into his short beard.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Everyone's been here for as long as I can remember.
GRETCHEN
Have you ever been anywhere else?
Ruffin shrugs noncommitally.
GRETCHEN
Outside of New Mexico?
RUFFIN COOMBS
Doesn't matter, really. Always come back here. Always come back home.
Ruffin points to the chicken on her plate.
RUFFIN COOMBS
I cooked it myself. Try it.
Gretchen takes a small bite. The bitter taste burns her tongue. She smiles graciously.
GRETCHEN
Mmmm.
RUFFIN COOMBS
I knew it. I knew you'd love it.
GRETCHEN
Ruffin, dear, could you run downstairs and get me some more water? I'm very thirsty.
Ruffin nearly knocks his chair over in excitement.
RUFFIN COOMBS
You bet.
Ruffin disappears down the stairwell. Gretchen searches for a place to dispose of her meal.
A SHADOW appears behind her.
MATTHIAS (O.S.)
You shouldn't have come.
Gretchen gasps and whirls around.
GRETCHEN
Matthias!
She reaches out to him, but he holds up his hands, stopping her.
MATTHIAS
I told you not to come. I left a note.
GRETCHEN
You wrote that I would never understand, and that I should never try to.
MATTHIAS
There's a stiff toll when you drive The Devil's Highway.
Matthias picks up the chicken from her plate. he takes a huge bite of it and sets it back in place.
MATTHIAS
Leave now. Don't pack. Don't shower. Don't tell anyone. Just go.
GRETCHEN
Why?
MATTHIAS
When the sun disappears below the horizon ...
The sun disappears below the horizon.
MATTHIAS
... too late.
He whirls and jumps off the edge of the roof. Gretchen looks down after him, but he's gone.
The breeze carries a whisper, "LEAVE A TOY."
RUFFIN COOMBS (O.S.)
Here we go. Water for the lady.
He looks over to Gretchen and smiles. Then his smile becomes much more menacing. His eyes darken slightly.
RUFFIN COOMBS
You're still here. Good.
Gretchen backs up a step and bumps into the railing.
GRETCHEN
Good, why?
RUFFIN COOMBS
Eat. You'll need your strength.
Gretchen walks quickly past him.
GRETCHEN
I think I want to go now.
He lunges out and grabs her hand, holding her fast.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Stay and watch the stars with me. It'll be very romantic.
GRETCHEN
I don't want romance.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Oh, but I think you do.
His demeanor changes radically. He stands and towers over Gretchen. He takes her by the shoulders and turns her to face East.
GRETCHEN
Let me go.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Look at all the pretty stars.
A STAR winks at Gretchen, then races wildly around in a chaotic dance. Two other stars join it.
Then the glowing lights grow huge as they get nearer and nearer.
GRETCHEN
What is going on here?
RUFFIN COOMBS
Daddy's coming home.
Gretchen pulls away from Ruffin and runs down the stairs.
INT MOTEL ROOM - CONTINUING
Gretchen locks the door and puts a chair in front of it. Her breath comes in panicked gasps.
She pulls the shades, but it does nothing to block the intense light from just outside.
Echoing metallically on the violent wind outside, the word, "TOYS" repeats over and over.
Gretchen digs into her duffel bag and pulls out a BARBIE DOLL. She throws it on the bed.
Outside, a high pitched gurgling noise intensifies over the Motel.
Gretchen's eyes race wildly as she curls up against the wall, just below the window. Suddenly, her face calms, and she smiles. Her eyelids droop heavily and she slumps to the floor.
Intense light penetrates the doorframe and enters the room. The doorknob turns, and the deadbolt clicks open.
A gentle wind stirs the hair around Gretchen's face. Her entire skin is bathed with bright light. Her eyes open a crack, then widen in fear.
A gray-skinned hand reaches out and touches her face. She slumps down again, completely paralyzed. Her mouth moves in silent terror.
An excited chirping / buzzing fills the room. Gretchen's back arches as if in pain, and her mouth trembles in an unheard scream.
INT MOTEL ROOM - NIGHT
Gretchen awakens underneath the covers of the bed. She licks her dry lips, finding an unpleasant taste in her mouth.
She looks down and sees her clothing on the floor.
At the foot of her bed is the Barbie Doll, completely undressed.
Gretchen pulls the covers tightly around herself for protection.
EXT MOTEL ROOM - MORNING
Gretchen opens her door and looks out into the street. A few children play in the distance. No sign of any of last night's events.
Then she looks out to the Motel parking lot. It's empty. Her car is nowhere to be seen.
GRETCHEN
Hey. What in the ninth level of Gehenna is going on here?
INT GENERAL STORE - CONTINUING
Gretchen enters, her clothing disheveled, and her hair a mess.
GRETCHEN
Where's my car?
Agnes smiles good morning at her. But she says nothing.
GRETCHEN
Where is my car?
Neira brings up some cereal from the back room to stock on the shelves.
NEIRA
Good morning, Gretchen. Did you sleep well?
GRETCHEN
Something really freaky is going on around here. Somebody stole my car.
NEIRA
That's strange. No, you must be mistaken. I would have heard the engine if that had happened.
Neira kneels down and stocks her merchandise.
AGNES BARTOLOME
You look like you've had a rough night. Why don't you take Gretchen for a walk in the hills, Neira?
NEIRA
You'll be okay here?
AGNES BARTOLOME
Go. It's not like I've never kept a store before. Go on. Scat, you two, or I'll make you both work.
Neira takes Gretchen's elbow and leads her outside.
GRETCHEN
Neira, I really need to know what's going on here.
NEIRA
Not here. There's too many people listening. We'll talk out there.
Neira looks Gretchen over.
NEIRA
You might want to put on some new clothes, those ones look a little worn.
Gretchen looks down at her clothes. Several perfectly cut holes open up in her shirt and pants.
INT MOTEL ROOM - CONTINUING
Neira picks up the Barbie Doll as Gretchen ducks into the bathroom to change.
GRETCHEN (O.S.)
You want to tell me what's up with Ruffin?
NEIRA
What do you mean? He's a little slow, I'll grant you that -
GRETCHEN (O.S.)
He's psycho.
Neira holds up Barbie's clothes. Her shirt and pants have identical holes to Gretchen's clothing.
NEIRA
So you like Barbie, huh?
GRETCHEN (O.S.)
It was a present. They said the dark hair was the same color as mine.
She emerges from the bathroom.
NEIRA
Close.
Gretchen takes the doll from Neira.
GRETCHEN
Something happened last night.
NEIRA
With Ruffin?
GRETCHEN
I don't know. I don't even know how to start talking about it.
NEIRA
If it was Ruffin, I want to hear everything.
She sits down eagerly on the corner of the bed. Her excited eyes betray her every emotion.
NEIRA
Sometimes I look at him, and I think he is so hot.
Gretchen slips a belt through her belt loops and cinches it tight.
GRETCHEN
I've interviewed probably a dozen people, but I never thought it would happen to me.
NEIRA
Come on, don't be shy. 'Fess up.
Gretchen takes a deep breath and holds on to her doll for support.
GRETCHEN
I think I may have had a close encounter last night.
NEIRA
With Ruffin?
GRETCHEN
No. With something else. Something not of this world. A really CLOSE encounter.
Understanding registers in Neira's eyes and she looks around, as if hearing somebody.
NEIRA
Come on. I'll take you someplace where we can talk.
EXT HALCYON FLATS - MORNING
Gretchen and Neira overlook a huge bowl-shape, hollowed out of solid rock. A solitary worn path leads from the hollow toward the distant town.
Crickets chirp and the breeze blows warm against their faces.
NEIRA
That's Halcyon Flats. We can talk there.
As they step from the dirt onto the solid rock, all sound ceases. Not even a whisper disturbs the stillness of this place.
GRETCHEN
Whoa. What just happened?
NEIRA
This is a special place. No one can hear us here.
Neira takes Gretchen by the arm and leads her to the center of the hollow.
NEIRA
Tell me again what happened.
GRETCHEN
It's really hard for me to say. There was a bright light outside. I heard some noises. Then it was like I fell asleep, or something.
Gretchen stops and looks questioningly at Neira.
GRETCHEN
I heard voices in my head. They were telling me that I should not be afraid, that I had been chosen because I was special.
Hairs rise on Gretchen's neck as she recounts the horrible memory.
GRETCHEN
I couldn't talk. I couldn't scream. I felt something pierce into my back and right into my heart.
Her voice breaks up as the emotions grab ahold of her again.
GRETCHEN
They did something to me. They took something from me.
NEIRA
What did they take from you, Gretchen?
GRETCHEN
That's just it, I don't know. But something's missing. In here, something's missing. I can feel it.
Neira rolls up her sleeves to show what appear to be tattoos on her upper arms.
NEIRA
The Toy Stealers always get what they want. Look.
Gretchen looks intently at the tattoos on Neira's arm. She reaches her finger out to touch them, but stops just short of the skin.
NEIRA
Go ahead. Feel.
Gretchen feels the skin.
GRETCHEN
It doesn't feel like a tattoo.
NEIRA
It's not. It's burned in there. I woke up one morning after a horrible nightmare ... and they were there. Branded.
GRETCHEN
When I woke up last night, I was ... well, you saw the Barbie.
Neira nods slowly.
NEIRA
They chose you.
A smile grows on Neira's face.
NEIRA
They chose You.
(laughs)
Oh wow. This is incredible. They chose YOU.
Neira hugs Gretchen and laughs.
NEIRA
Of all the girls here in town, you were the one deemed worthy. You, Gretchen, are the chosen one.
Gretchen steps back, the silence echoing painfully in her ears.
GRETCHEN
What if I don't want it? What if I don't want to be the chosen one?
NEIRA
It doesn't work like that.
GRETCHEN
But what if it did?
NEIRA
You'll love it. Queen for a day, they say.
Gretchen squints at the sun high in the sky.
GRETCHEN
Queen, huh? So that means they do what I say. No questions?
NEIRA
If you get the glory, you'll know the story.
GRETCHEN
Nattie'll love this. He's my boss.
NEIRA
Go ahead. Call him. Try.
Gretchen dials on her cell phone. It's dead. No signal, not even the face lights up.
NEIRA
Dead.
Neira skips away, giggling. As she passes the edge of Halcyon Flats, she pauses. Her eyes go black momentarily.
She turns and gestures back toward the town.
NEIRA
They like toys.
GRETCHEN
What do you mean, they like toys? Neira? Come back.
Gretchen runs to the top of the bowl, but Neira is already at the bottom of the rise.
GRETCHEN
I'm going over Nattie's head for this. Weekly World News gets the straight scoop from Gretchen Holdir on this one.
(looks at cell phone)
It's working.
Gretchen looks back at the stillness of Halcyon Flats.
GRETCHEN
Queen for a day. Cool.
EXT GENERAL STORE - EVENING
Matthias munches on stale popcorn from an old box.
Gretchen emerges from the motel across the street. She shakes out her hair and glances over at Matthias.
GRETCHEN
What brought you here?
MATTHIAS
(lifting popcorn)
The food.
GRETCHEN
I looked everywhere for you. Why'd you run out on me? I thought we had something good.
MATTHIAS
I had other obligations.
Gretchen sits down next to Matthias. He squints against the setting sun.
GRETCHEN
What was her name? Was she worth it? We were rock solid for nine months. That's serious commitment there. Then I wake up and you're gone.
MATTHIAS
Did you get the ring?
Gretchen holds out her hand. The silver ring glistens on her ring finger.
MATTHIAS
Wrong place for it. Not that type of ring.
GRETCHEN
I would have said yes.
MATTHIAS
And now?
GRETCHEN
Now? I think I'd like some popcorn.
MATTHIAS
It's old.
GRETCHEN
I would like some popcorn please.
MATTHIAS
You wouldn't like it.
GRETCHEN
Try me.
Gretchen reaches into the box. She pulls out some old popcorn, but her hands come out covered in cobwebs and dust.
Matthias keeps eating.
GRETCHEN
Stop it. Matthias, you're going to get sick.
MATTHIAS
Hope so.
GRETCHEN
Matthias, stop this. You're not making any sense to me. You walk out on our perfect relationship without a word -
MATTHIAS
I wrote.
GRETCHEN
Yeah, one stupid, senseless note saying goodbye. That's not what I mean. You know it.
Matthias shakes the box to prove that it's empty.
MATTHIAS
Finished?
GRETCHEN
Yeah.
Matthias gets up and walks away.
GRETCHEN
Wait. I meant no. Where are you going?
MATTHIAS
I'm where I'm gonna be. See ya, kid.
Gretchen pulls out her notebook from her pocket.
GRETCHEN
Fine. Tell me one thing, and I'll leave you alone.
MATTHIAS
One thing?
GRETCHEN
Just one. Tell me the truth.
Matthias looks beyond Gretchen, then steps very close. His voice drops to almost a conspiratorial whisper.
MATTHIAS
The truth? It's all true.
Winks, and walks away.
GRETCHEN
What kind of answer -
She turns around and bumps into Ruffin.
RUFFIN COOMBS
That fella giving you problems. I can toss 'im in the cooler again. But he'll just get out. Strangest thing. Can never seem to keep him locked in anything.
GRETCHEN
He has a way of getting out of things.
Ruffin runs his hand through his greasy hair.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Neira tells me you got chosed.
GRETCHEN
Yeah, I wanted someone to tell me what all this business is about being Queen for a day.
RUFFIN COOMBS
Queen for a day? That's a laugh. Well, I guess some girls'll do what it takes to narrow the field.